box kite experiment
The box kite floating high over the marsh and the string, the downward trailing arc of which you are following across an abstract blue field past curious geometrical forms of white and yellow & a cloud of mechanical birds wobbling their machine trajectories through modalities of falling, some mirroring the arc of the string, others tracing angular shapes against the receding blue of your visual field & you choose one and its falling toward the point of its absorption & across the marsh surface a human shape separating from a cube in the ochre and green of the grasses carries two long poles red at each end then stops; two red flags blur hesitate blur hesitate a message mediated by distance and distortion, deciphering and distraction, static and memory and the forms are gone. Traveling back toward the memory bird you find yourself disoriented.
The box kite floated high over the marsh and the string, the downward trailing arc of which you are following across an abstract blue field past curious geometrical forms of white and yellow, the line of time the arc of things, lifespans and trajectories, the tenuousness of focus on a thin white thread in the glare off the water in the sunlight of the morning, your descent the trail you follow through oscillations of foreground and background which slow as your viewpoint approaches the rooftop you are perched on the edges of your body naked on a rooftop & the kite that is tied to your penis.
The box kite floated high over the marsh and the string, the downward trailing arc of which you are following across an abstract blue field past curious geometrical forms of white and yellow, the line of time the arc of things, lifespans and trajectories, the tenuousness of focus on a thin white thread in the glare off the water in the sunlight of the morning, your descent the trail you follow through oscillations of foreground and background which slow as your viewpoint approaches the rooftop you are perched on the edges of your body naked on a rooftop & the kite that is tied to your penis.
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it'd be simple enough to tamper with the margins and so make this into a box kite on the page, but i cant decide if doing that would be cheesy or not. something about it appeals to me though, mostly because of how this ends.
btw this is based on a dream i had that i am not sure about the meaning of.Posted 10-25-2009 at 07:13 AM by roachboy
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Hardly cheesy. Do it.Posted 10-25-2009 at 09:39 AM by Plan9
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huh. interesting. it's a little more difficult than i thought. so i made a bunch of little edits to see if i can align the words correctly. it's kinda cool asa box kite.Posted 10-25-2009 at 12:42 PM by roachboy
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You could always write it by hand and scan it or format it in MS Word or a photo editor and save it as a JPG. Then, post the JPG.Posted 10-25-2009 at 04:19 PM by sapiens
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true.
for some reason i never thought of that.
i suppose i could look at whether i can upload a pdf, which is a format i use more often.
nice
thanks.Posted 10-25-2009 at 06:37 PM by roachboy
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